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About Nathan DeGraaf
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Tampa, FL by way of St. Louis, MO
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University of South Florida
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Nathan DeGraaf graduated fucking years ago with a BA in Creative Writing from the University of South Florida, which he still lives near because college chicks are the best.
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Slang
This hand in fist
With arm and anger
Struck down upon the face of danger
And took a piece of life with love,
Let it soar, like a freedom’s dove.
And as it soared, this freedom did
Kiss the face of every kid
Who ever longed to live for life
And watch the day escape the night.
But this cruel world with its rules and laws,
Its petty judgments and emotional flaws,
Looked down upon these spirits of freedom
And locked them in a hellish kingdom,
Where all they loved and all they lived for
Was no more.
So what to do but make a hand into a fist
And throw the arm and twist the wrist
And break the nose on the face of fate?
And for their crimes,
They were locked away,
Alone with an occasional sunbeam,
A brief glimpse of day.
Wisdom is no friend of irresponsibility
Just as action may require ability
But time moves on and so did they
Into the world of everyday.
And though they smile and though they grow,
Their closest friends do rightly know
That these kids wait in the land of the living
For the world to ask to be forgiven.
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Anonymous, I'm fine.
Court, I'm touched.
This halloween, I decided to dress this entry up as the poem of a brooding teenager. Hope you enjoyed. I'll try not to do this again. Thanks.
I was touched too. *Good* touch though. Not like the kind that requires you to register and not leave your domicile on Halloween here in Texas.
Tif, I love you. Always have, always will. That being said, if Dad knew that you just misspelled your own name, well he'd be very upset. I'm not telling on you or anything, but you know he owns a computer. Love you.
N8, I thought I remembered that poem too! Common, Tiffy, I know you can spell better than that!! N8, how bout a poem for the old stadium? The new lights are already on as they work through the night on it. Dad
Dad, I'll get right on it. Though I doubt it'll make the blog. I try to keep my poetry out of the blog on the grounds that it's not funny. All of the sudden, my comment box is like a family reunion. Tom, you got the grill? Dad, we need more beer. Tif, you think you can wrap these presents for me. Wow.
I get a chance to impress your brother, your sister and your dad and I'm in IRELAND? Life is COMPLETELY UNFAIR. ;)
I loved it.
I have a whole file of poetry Nate wrote when he was younger...starting at about age 7 or 8. And, with few exceptions, it's all good stuff...and has limted profanity, which means I know you can still write like that. love you mom
Nate, who's Lulu, and Mom's right, too many f.. words sometimes. So what if your stadium poem is sad, it is sad to see it go down. Whanna hear about the first time I went there? Family history you don't know about. Tiffy, still love you!! Dad
I feel like you've gathered your family for a living room reading of a poem you wrote at school.
Remember parents, STAY INVOLVED.
A little heavy-handed, a little contrived.
The meter is out of whack but the timbre is excellent. I liked the personification of Wisdom, and the synecdoche of day.
Nick's Poetry Rating: 6 out of 10.
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